“The Decaying Flower That Blooms"?

The flower pot stood against the window pane; no one ever knew a flower existed in it.


In the summer, it’s color were loud, appealing, and warm; as it grew and expanded it’s leaves.





In the winter, it withered; the flower and petals began to fall, the colors began to fade and the growth of the flower begun to decrease and limb over the flower pot; the flower had died.





It had no meaning; it had no purpose because it was dead…





Everything has a purpose and everything has a reason…





When life dies; new life begins; the flower had grew another bud and now there were two; one bud dying and one bud alive because the summer and winter had came again and yet it stood, alone and unnoticed until it rained and one of the buds grew and turned into a rose lying next to a decaying flower that bloomed.
“The Decaying Flower That Blooms"?
This is a fascinating study of what goes into a poem. You really have some profound ideas. To refine the poem, you need to introduce metaphors and rhythm and or rhyme. See this link for some ideas of what you could do to really make this come to life.





Keep writing. You have some very vital ideas.





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Reply:great poem about life/death matrix and regeneration added to the mix. winter /summer symbolism's deployed quite appropriately.


Be encouraged. Keep on writing such creative poems.flower