Saturday, October 24, 2009

Ladies Full Version of "A Flower Falls"? thoughts, feelings?? welcome?

Waking in peace early in the morn, just before dawn


she glistens in the moonlit dew, right before she's gone.


Beauty stands upright and proud, showing the world her final stand,





Before the last sunrise sparkles, she concedes defeat at hand.





The morning dew drips down her Blazen petals, the withering begins,


A flower falls from grace, but not to death, she'll know not sins.


Enriching soil beneath her grave for her sister flower to grow,


she leaves behind memories of class, etched deeply in her soul.





A flower falls in victory, as the world sleeps in total bliss,


honor your flower in early morn, a sight you should not miss.





Your flower is in you...... A flower falls, and ,, is re-born..
Ladies Full Version of "A Flower Falls"? thoughts, feelings?? welcome?
well, i'm not sure i get it, but it is worded beautifully. it holds a certain happy sadness that is a nice change from most poems i come across. did you write it?
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